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What are the most common landing page mistakes?

Efri · 1 min read
At a glance
9 parts
  • Nobody can tell what it is
  • Written from your side, not theirs
  • No obvious next step at the point they're convinced
  • Too many things to do
  • Hiding the price
  • Answering the easy objections
  • Trying to talk to everyone
  • Nothing that proves anything
  • Built for you, not for a phone
  1. 1
    Nobody can tell what it is. A stranger should know what you do within seconds. Most pages open with a clever line instead of the actual thing.
  2. 2
    Written from your side, not theirs. Features you're proud of, instead of the problem they came in with.
  3. 3
    No obvious next step at the point they're convinced. One button at the bottom, and they were ready halfway up.
  4. 4
    Too many things to do. Book a call, download the guide, join the newsletter, start a trial. Give people four choices and they take none.
  5. 5
    Hiding the price. Makes people suspicious, and they leave to go find it somewhere else.
  6. 6
    Answering the easy objections. The comfortable ones you wish they'd ask, not the real ones they actually have.
  7. 7
    Trying to talk to everyone. So it lands with nobody.
  8. 8
    Nothing that proves anything. No numbers, no specifics, no screenshots. Just adjectives.
  9. 9
    Built for you, not for a phone. Most of your traffic is on a phone.

The quickest way to find yours: show it to five strangers who match your buyer, and ask them what it does, who it's for, and what it costs.